Posted By HS Traxx on 16 Jul 2009 01:42 PM
I've heard when boys lose their virginity at an early age, sex becomes a joke to them and they become super-pimps in their teens and adult life. Of course they also suffer mental illnesses and deep insecurities once they pass their late 20's too (due to a lack of deep connection or rapport with people), so don't envy them.
And as interesting as this story is, I don't buy all of it. I encourage B# to continue writing as he seems to have great skill in connecting with his audience, but people also don't deserve to be mislead.
My case in point? Governments don't just give you huge checks in the mail. And when cashing large sums of money, financial institutions take weeks to verify the validity of the check, so any "mistaken gifts" are out of the question. They also wouldn't give you the amount in "20s", as most of their large bills consist of 100s,
Inconsistencies like that detract from the main story/message you're trying to convey, so try to take it easy on the "embellishments" my man. But keep writing, I'm interested to see where you take this.
I HAVE NOT READ EVERYONES COMMENTS BUT I WILL ADDRESS THIS ONE FIRST...
First of all... everything and i mean everything i am writing here is 100% true and i am telling you it gets much deeper than this. you have no idea where i am taking this but you will and you will one day hear about this in the news. It's been many many years that I have struggled against an agency who thought I was someone doing something that I was not... and in their failure to bring it to light they decided to "frame" me....
anyway, I did say I got a lump sum from the government which I did... but I never said it was in one check. I in fact had several in the mail the first day. I recall there were 3 checks of over $3,000 each. I think I had over $11,000 that first day when i went to check the mail. also i stated that i tried to cash the check at the local bank which I had been a member for a number of years... HOWEVER, the manager of the bank; the same guy that had seem me come in time and time again looked at me... looked at my checks, looked at me.... and said:
"I'm sorry, the best thing I can do is placed them in your account and hold them for 15 days until they clear."
SOooooooooo, I took them to a check cashing place. serious and no jive. They would take me to the little door that you never notice until you have to go there and in a private booth they counted out whatever sum of money all in $20 bills. And that's how I made my purchases... all in twenties. EVERYWHERE I WENT! Now you tell me... what would you think if for as long as you knew this black man he never had anything really to show, no job, wearing the same clothes all the time, not even a bike but then one day he shows up driving a brand new motorcycle, new clothes the next day, buys a real nice truck and oh yeah.... buys everything in $20's? hmmmm, huh? and lets not forget to mention that i was the ONLY black man in the community of burbank california....
that started all the drama! and all someone had to do was check to see where the money was coming from.... it was GOVERNMENT CHECKS!!!
stay tuned.... this gets really deep!
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